Hi Redy9: Great work! There are many ways to correct the below sentences. I have given you one possibility for each incorrect sentence. Hope you enjoyed the film!
1) X The film is about a man who, i think, lost himself in Second Life. Correct: I think the film is about a man who lost himself in Second Life. X The film show me the dangers of Second Life and Internet-Games as well. Correct: The film showed me the dangers of Second Life and internet games as well.
2) Good! It`s interesting to see what is possible here. Good! I didn`t know it. X It`s funny, every day i discover a new thing here. :) Correct: It's funny, I discover something new here every day.
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Hi Kip, here i try it again ;)
1. The film is about a man who, i think, lost himself in Second Life. The film show me the dangers of Second Life and Internet-Games as well.
2. It`s interesting to see what is possible here. I didn`t know it. It`s funny, every day i discover a new thing here. :)
Hi Redy9: Great work! There are many ways to correct the below sentences. I have given you one possibility for each incorrect sentence. Hope you enjoyed the film!
1)
X The film is about a man who, i think, lost himself in Second Life.
Correct: I think the film is about a man who lost himself in Second Life.
X The film show me the dangers of Second Life and Internet-Games as well.
Correct: The film showed me the dangers of Second Life and internet games as well.
2)
Good! It`s interesting to see what is possible here.
Good! I didn`t know it.
X It`s funny, every day i discover a new thing here. :)
Correct: It's funny, I discover something new here every day.
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