Sunday, March 18, 2007

Take a Break!



English Exercise

Try to answer the following questions about the above film.
If you have a question about someting, just ask! ;)

1) What is the film about?

2) What do you think about people making films in Second Life?

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Kip, here i try it again ;)

1. The film is about a man who, i think, lost himself in Second Life. The film show me the dangers of Second Life and Internet-Games as well.

2. It`s interesting to see what is possible here. I didn`t know it. It`s funny, every day i discover a new thing here. :)

Kip Yellowjacket said...

Hi Redy9: Great work! There are many ways to correct the below sentences. I have given you one possibility for each incorrect sentence. Hope you enjoyed the film!

1)
X The film is about a man who, i think, lost himself in Second Life.
Correct: I think the film is about a man who lost himself in Second Life.
X The film show me the dangers of Second Life and Internet-Games as well.
Correct: The film showed me the dangers of Second Life and internet games as well.

2)
Good! It`s interesting to see what is possible here.
Good! I didn`t know it.
X It`s funny, every day i discover a new thing here. :)
Correct: It's funny, I discover something new here every day.